Hi Brighid Thanks for sharing your writing on the sea/ocean/moana on your blog so I can read it. I like how you have used a new slide for each new paragraph, and the way you have structured your ideas so clearly, including a conclusion which brings all your ideas together. I think your grandparents and aunties & uncles would like to read your thoughtful writing as well. Would you like to email them with your blog link?
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ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your writing on the sea/ocean/moana on your blog so I can read it. I like how you have used a new slide for each new paragraph, and the way you have structured your ideas so clearly, including a conclusion which brings all your ideas together. I think your grandparents and aunties & uncles would like to read your thoughtful writing as well. Would you like to email them with your blog link?
Heya Bridg! Love your descriptive writing, and placement of graphics and text! Awesome work!! Cyb x
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