but in class instead of making a comic strip we had to make a scratch emanation
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Thursday, 4 July 2019
scratch emanation
but in class instead of making a comic strip we had to make a scratch emanation
Wednesday, 3 July 2019
throne of glass book review
Throne of Glass Book Review
Are you a child in your teen/ tween years? Are you someone looking for something to read as in something that’s actually interesting! I have got just the book for you. Seriously this book is amazing! It’s got fantasy, adventure, lots of action and even the slightest bit of romance.
Throne of Glass is a fiction book written by Sara J Mass. I would recommend this book for children aged 11 to 16 because it has some strong content in it that would be too much for younger children but I think that this age group is old enough to handle it in a mature way.
Most of the story is set in Rifthold which is the capital city of Aradon. Aradon is the largest country in the continent of Erilea
The main characters in this book are Celaena Sardothien, Chaol Westfall, Dorian Havilliard, Nehemia Ytger, Cain, the king of Aradon, Nox and Kaltien. Celaena is an eighteen year old assassin who gwas caught and now is a slave in Evander,a salt mine slave camp. Celaena gets the opportunity to go into a competition in which she could finally get her freedom after five years of being the king’s assassin… but only if she wins.
Chaol is captain of the guard in the castle serving for the king. Then the competition comes along and his best friend Dorian chooses to enter Celaena and it becomes his job to look after this snobby teenage brat, or so he thinks.
Dorian is the crown prince of Aradon and best friends with Chaol. When Celaena comes to the castle for the competition Dorian thinks he might of actually found love other than the thousands of girls that have swooned over him in the past.
Nehemia is the princess of Eyllwe. She is a strong leader and will do anything for her country and stopping her people from becoming slaves of the king of Aradon. She goes to Rifthold to supposedly learn about the Aradon way of life and ends up becoming best friends with Celana.
There isn’t really much to say about the king of Aradon. He’s just some evil king who took over the whole continent, slaughtered heaps of people and somehow managed to get rid of magic.
Cain is the Duke of Perrenton’s entry into the competition. He is from the White Fang Mountains where there is rumoured to still be magic but he is not the nicest person to be around.
Nox is the only person in the competition to be nice to celana throughout it. They help each other to keep going and complete the elimination challenges.
Katlian is one of the ladies in waiting To the Queen. She is very beautiful and comes with family rumoured to be Richer in the King but she is very snobby and spends most of her time trying to win over Dorian.
I think that this book ralits to me because me and celaena both started fighting training at a young age and I feel like I can connect to her personality and we are really similar people.
In conclusion I think Throne of Glass is a good book that you should definitely read!
I think you will really enjoy it especially if you like drama, adventure and fantasy books.
Wednesday, 26 June 2019
Wednesday, 19 June 2019
Wednesday, 5 June 2019
nz giants challange
This week around the world is be with a tree week which is about calibrating the environment. In our class we did a project about giant plants and animals in New Zealand. I did mine on the Haast eagle I hope you enjoy.
Tuesday, 21 May 2019
Thursday, 9 May 2019
road crossing safety
Kea Patrol
I strongly agree that we should use kea patrol at Karoro because
I feel that it helps people cross the road safe and happy.
Kea patrol is a good opportunity for students to help.
I feel that it helps people cross the road safe and happy.
Kea patrol is a good opportunity for students to help.
One reason the I feel very strongly that we should keep kea patrol at Karoro
school is that it helps people cross the street safely.
This is important because Karoro school is right next to a state highway
so the traffic is going very fast. Even if we were next to a quieter road there
would still be danger because there would still be cars that could come and
some kids might be silly and just run across the road without looking.
There are a lot of people that cross the road and some of them are very small.
Their parents aren't always there to pick them up so if they try to cross the
road by themselves cars might not be able to see them.
school is that it helps people cross the street safely.
This is important because Karoro school is right next to a state highway
so the traffic is going very fast. Even if we were next to a quieter road there
would still be danger because there would still be cars that could come and
some kids might be silly and just run across the road without looking.
There are a lot of people that cross the road and some of them are very small.
Their parents aren't always there to pick them up so if they try to cross the
road by themselves cars might not be able to see them.
Another reason I think kea patrol is important is that giving students the
opportunity to help out gives them a sense of maturity and makes them feel
important. Kea patrol gives these kids a chance to help out with their school
and develop leadership skills. This experience can help them speak louder
and have more confidence with other things in their life.
opportunity to help out gives them a sense of maturity and makes them feel
important. Kea patrol gives these kids a chance to help out with their school
and develop leadership skills. This experience can help them speak louder
and have more confidence with other things in their life.
I personally feel that road patrol is vitally important because of safety and
responsibility. We must use kea patrol at Karoro School and other schools
throughout New Zealand.
responsibility. We must use kea patrol at Karoro School and other schools
throughout New Zealand.
Kupu Hou O Te Wiki 2
this week in school we had to make a comic strip about the phrase haere ra wich means good dye to those who are leaving
Success criteria:
Create a comic strip character who will
be used to carry your
understanding of each phrase of the
week.
be used to carry your
understanding of each phrase of the
week.
Draw the comic strip.
Check with the teacher.
Post on your blog.
Check with the teacher.
Post on your blog.
Friday, 3 May 2019
Kupu Hou O Te Wiki
this week in school we had to make a comic strip about the phrase ahora mai which means sorry her is mine.
Success criteria:
Create a comic strip character who will
be used to carry your
understanding of each phrase of the
week.
be used to carry your
understanding of each phrase of the
week.
Tuesday, 19 June 2018
Space Timeline Reading Task
Space timeline Reading tasks.
Term 2 Weeks 5-6
Purpose of this reading activity is to: increase our knowledge
of space exploration and understand how our knowledge and ideas
about space have changed over time (science). We are also
learning to read non-fiction texts and use our writing skills to
share our understanding of this topic and our ideas (literacy).
Throughout this task we will need to use the skills of ‘Thinking’ and
using ‘Language, Symbols and Text.’
of space exploration and understand how our knowledge and ideas
about space have changed over time (science). We are also
learning to read non-fiction texts and use our writing skills to
share our understanding of this topic and our ideas (literacy).
Throughout this task we will need to use the skills of ‘Thinking’ and
using ‘Language, Symbols and Text.’
Learning Intentions
I am learning to skim and scan text to identify the main ideas.
I am learning to locate the key sentences and questions in texts.
I am learning to use sub-headings to guide me to the main ideas in text.
I am learning to summarise the main ideas in the texts I read.
(from the Karoro Programme of work for Reading)
Success Criteria
I will be successful when I can show….
-I have have scanned text to find key ideas.
-I have summarised the main ideas from the reading.
-I have put my answers in chronological order.
Focus
We are looking at using non-fiction text to increase our knowledge in our science
topic; SPACE. Your aim is to read and understand the timeline reading and use this
knowledge to complete the reading activity below.
topic; SPACE. Your aim is to read and understand the timeline reading and use this
knowledge to complete the reading activity below.
Second, We will discuss what you have read. This will be a good time to ask questions
about anything you are unsure of.
about anything you are unsure of.
Third, do your reading tasks.
Fourth, complete your reading activity. Remember to proofread,
check spelling and punctuation. Then do a self assessment and a peer assessment.
Check it with a teacher.
check spelling and punctuation. Then do a self assessment and a peer assessment.
Check it with a teacher.
Reading Activity
View and read the space timeline on the classroom walls.
Think about how how our theories/ideas and understandings
about the universe and Earth’s place in it has changed over time.
Think about how how our theories/ideas and understandings
about the universe and Earth’s place in it has changed over time.
Answer the following questions.
Your answers need to be full sentences.
After you have answered all the questions please put them in
chronological order (time order, oldest first)
chronological order (time order, oldest first)
5) What are two things that Galileo discovered?
Two things Galileo discovered is Jupiter's moons and
Lunar (our moon) crates(1610)
Two things Galileo discovered is Jupiter's moons and
Lunar (our moon) crates(1610)
9) Who discovered the first asteroid?
The first asteroid was discovered by Giuseppe Piazzi
it was called Ceres. (1801)
The first asteroid was discovered by Giuseppe Piazzi
it was called Ceres. (1801)
2) What was Sputnik 1?The Sputnik 1 was Russian satellite (1957)
3) In what year was NASA founded? And what does NASA mean?
NASA means National Aeronautics and Space Administration.
It was founded in 1958. (1958)
NASA means National Aeronautics and Space Administration.
It was founded in 1958. (1958)
6) Who was the first woman in space? And where was she from?
The first women in space was Valentina
The first women in space was Valentina
Tereshkova and she was Russian. (1963)
4)Where did Mariner 4 fly past?
Mariner 4 flew past Mars. (1965)
Mariner 4 flew past Mars. (1965)
7) In what year did Apollo 11 land on the moon?
Apollo 11 landed on the moon in 1969. (1969)
Apollo 11 landed on the moon in 1969. (1969)
10) What country launched Voyager probes 1 and 2 into deep space?
America launched probes 1&2 into space. (1977)
America launched probes 1&2 into space. (1977)
8) What happened that led to all space shuttles being grounded for 3 years?
The space shuttle Challenger exploded after launch. (1986)
The space shuttle Challenger exploded after launch. (1986)
11) When was the international space station completed?
The international space station was completed in 2010(1986)
1)How long did it take for the Cassini probe to arrive at Saturn?
It took 7 years for the Cassini Probe to arrive in Saturn. (2004)
It took 7 years for the Cassini Probe to arrive in Saturn. (2004)
12) What was interesting about New Horizons information about Pluto?
What was interesting about New Horizons information is that he found out that
pluto was 50 miles larger than at first thought. (2015)
What was interesting about New Horizons information is that he found out that
pluto was 50 miles larger than at first thought. (2015)
YOUR OPINION
After reading this information...
- Who do you think made the biggest contribution to our
- understanding of space? Why? (summarising key ideas)
I think the person that made the best contribution to finding out
about space was Galileo Galilei because he invented the telescope and
had proof behind the fact that the rest of the solar system doesn't revolve
around Earth.
about space was Galileo Galilei because he invented the telescope and
had proof behind the fact that the rest of the solar system doesn't revolve
around Earth.
2) What do you think was the most important machine or
invention in helping us investigate space? Why? (summarising key ideas)
I think the invention that helped as to discover the most about space
is the telescope. The telescope used to be very mina and not let as see
motch but now it can let as see the entire universe
invention in helping us investigate space? Why? (summarising key ideas)
I think the invention that helped as to discover the most about space
is the telescope. The telescope used to be very mina and not let as see
motch but now it can let as see the entire universe
3) What would you like to investigate about space? Why?
In space i would like to know about planets humans could
possibly live on because i want to see if their are any out there.
It could also be quite useful in the future when
earth gets to small for humans.
In space i would like to know about planets humans could
possibly live on because i want to see if their are any out there.
It could also be quite useful in the future when
earth gets to small for humans.
Self and Peer Assessment.
Self and Peer Assessment
Success Criteria
I will be successful when I can show….
-I have have scanned text to find key ideas.
-I have summarised the main ideas from the reading.
- I have put my answers in chronological order.
Success criteria 1: I have have scanned text to find key ideas (I have been able to answer the questions).
Achieved well Achieved some Achieved little Not achieved
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Success criteria 2: -I have summarised the main ideas from the reading.
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Success criteria 3: I have put my answers in correct chronological order.
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Thursday, 14 June 2018
Zomba Floss
Create and Describe Your Own Planet -

Description writing task
Term 2 Weeks 5-6
Purpose of this piece of writing is to:
Learning Intentions
I am learning to use language features to
make my writing interesting and engaging for the reader.
make my writing interesting and engaging for the reader.
I am learning to use topic-specific vocabulary.
I am learning to include Te Reo Māori words in my writing.
I will be successful when I can show….
-I have used some language features to make my
writing interesting and engaging (simile, metaphor,
alliteration, onomatopoeia, rhyme)
writing interesting and engaging (simile, metaphor,
alliteration, onomatopoeia, rhyme)
-I have carefully chosen some topic specific words to'
include in my writing.
include in my writing.
-I have used some Te Reo Māori
Focus
We are continuing to look at descriptive writing. This week you are writing a descriptive piec
e of writing to promote your imaginary planet. You aim is to convince people to move to your planet
. You want your writing to allow the reader to be able to imagine what it is like on your planet.
e of writing to promote your imaginary planet. You aim is to convince people to move to your planet
. You want your writing to allow the reader to be able to imagine what it is like on your planet.
First, we will look at an excerpt of a video describing the moon from the Avatar movie.
Click here to get to video= Pandora.
Click here to get to video= Pandora.
Second, we will discuss together what you will need in your work to make it successful
and look at how to plan our work. Then you will plan your work and check with a teacher before you start writing.
and look at how to plan our work. Then you will plan your work and check with a teacher before you start writing.
Third, do your piece of writing.
Fourth, complete you piece of writing. Remember to proof-read
(check spelling and punctuation) and edit (does it make sense? do you need to change any sentences?)
yourself and with a buddy and fill in your self and peer-assessment. Check it with a teacher.
(check spelling and punctuation) and edit (does it make sense? do you need to change any sentences?)
yourself and with a buddy and fill in your self and peer-assessment. Check it with a teacher.
my writting
Zomba Floss
The planet Zomba Floss is 946,000,000,000,000,000,000 light years away in the Koukog Galaxy.
It is the only planet in the Koukog Galaxy. This galaxy has no sun.
The Zomba Floss planet is able to survive without a sun because it has a rock in
the middle of its core that is 873,973,000,001℃ which gives the planet wera(warmth/hot)
and there are some holes in the ground that go to the rock that give out light.
It is the only planet in the Koukog Galaxy. This galaxy has no sun.
The Zomba Floss planet is able to survive without a sun because it has a rock in
the middle of its core that is 873,973,000,001℃ which gives the planet wera(warmth/hot)
and there are some holes in the ground that go to the rock that give out light.
The weather on Zomba Floss is always good because there is no rā and no kātao,
as they do not need any. But don’t worry we can get a similar substance to water by mixing flour with
crooce*. The atmosphere is not oxygen but humans can still breath it.
as they do not need any. But don’t worry we can get a similar substance to water by mixing flour with
crooce*. The atmosphere is not oxygen but humans can still breath it.
There two different types of life on Zomba Floss.
One is crooce. Crooce is a plant that looks a bit like grass but is definitely not!
It is made up of completely different molecules and its dna code is unique and unlike any other
Crooce is also tawa. The other living creature is touitgh.
Touitgh is a black creature with a roundish body and six legs it
also has two arms that start on it back and came up and connected to its
shoulders then keep going about a 50 cm to a metre.
Touitgh are very protective of their planet and if tauiwi (visertes/foreigner)
go on it they swes will kill as instantly with their sonar!
One is crooce. Crooce is a plant that looks a bit like grass but is definitely not!
It is made up of completely different molecules and its dna code is unique and unlike any other
Crooce is also tawa. The other living creature is touitgh.
Touitgh is a black creature with a roundish body and six legs it
also has two arms that start on it back and came up and connected to its
shoulders then keep going about a 50 cm to a metre.
Touitgh are very protective of their planet and if tauiwi (visertes/foreigner)
go on it they swes will kill as instantly with their sonar!
To get to the planet Zomba Floss first you need to go to Jupiter's moon Autonoe
and get a korps rock. The korps rock is a kakariki rock.
That can hypnotize touitgh so they don’t kill you.
Then you need to freeze yourself then you can go their in a v.g.p once you are in 20 aho
(light) minutes of Zomba Floss you can defrost yourself and continue on with the journey.
and get a korps rock. The korps rock is a kakariki rock.
That can hypnotize touitgh so they don’t kill you.
Then you need to freeze yourself then you can go their in a v.g.p once you are in 20 aho
(light) minutes of Zomba Floss you can defrost yourself and continue on with the journey.
The reasons that you would go to Zomba Floss are:
if you eat crooce raw you live forever, the have a lot off renta* mines.
Zomba floss is a beautiful planet with high hills and great views.
It is a safe planet and a great place to live.
if you eat crooce raw you live forever, the have a lot off renta* mines.
Zomba floss is a beautiful planet with high hills and great views.
It is a safe planet and a great place to live.
*crooce is a plant that is a bit like grass that grows on Zomba Floss. I will explain more later.
*renta is a future metal that is more valuable than gold
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